Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://youtu.be/yz8VvYf1RdQ
Having received some feedback from my last pitch, I found that feedback based on required peer reviews ultimately leads to primarily positive results. They basically consisted of expressing that if I were to effectively execute what I propose, it would be a good idea and that my explanation of my concept in my elevator pitch was good. Due to the nature of this feedback, which I myself may be guilty of providing at times, the feedback was neither surprising, outright wrong, silly, amazing, or insightful.
Like last time, I did not change anything based on the feedback; however, I did make changes. I was thinking about my business concept and I just didn’t like it in its entirety. While I like the philanthropic approach with the emphasis on improving people’s physical health, I am not particularly passionate about that combination of concepts. Instead, I aim to focus on food education, teaching people how and what to eat, including the cooking involved in making those meals possible.
Hey Kira! Your video was great and I think you got your point across for what you are trying to do with your business idea and what it entails. This video was definitely a great improvement from your last videos because I can tell you are more sure of what you are trying to convey to your listeners. The only thing I can say is that maybe you could stay a more focused on the overall business aspect and how it is going to prosper.
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